For this weeks PT idea (dropping a line; choose a line from a poem by some one else and use it in a poem of your own), I chose our grey glacier awaits from Scotty - The Frog Prince. Thank you Scotty.
our grey glacier awaits
a ceaseless decline
of what we thought
our ennobled merit
a sudden fear for escape
in memory and reflection
for all the intricate build-up details
of whom we became
lie prominently in the past
where we no longer get to rejoice
at times of reminiscence
but now reside
in seemingly perfect peace
unaware of future truth
and present gliding loss
3 comments:
You're welcome, fragments - I'm flattered that you found the line interesting or intriguing enough to want to try.
And an enjoyable read it is too.
:-)
very true, the ending is particularly effective.
Reflecting....
Like the way scotty's line is used here.
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